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Post by kei on Jul 9, 2013 8:37:08 GMT
Raisa, another great name. I love the way you've continued it. It's good that you've left the drawf we should all take charge of our own characters from here on in though anyone can write the destiny of other secondary characters. I have a good follow on idea but it may have to wait till tomorrow as there's a lot of real life stuff going on today.
In the meantime - we've fallen behind in plotting the storyline on the story page. Fruitbat - you're up next, your last piece needs placing up there to follow James (Which I placed for him while he was away) then i have a piece to place then James then fruitbat her latest piece. Thanks guys.
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Post by fruitbat on Jul 9, 2013 9:40:57 GMT
Will do!
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Post by kei on Jul 11, 2013 9:56:09 GMT
Dulin (doo-leen) scaled the wall effortlessly, her bow slung across her back effectively pinning her dark cloak to her black skin. She was a dark elf of the Ava Sorya resistance movement, the one, that history claims, single handedly brought down the seven Generals of Ohta.
Swiftly moving over the top edge of the wall Dulin crouched on the battlements of the Ohta and, drawing an arrow from the quiver attached to her thigh, A silent death. They never saw her coming.
She stood silently for a while just looking down into the compound; noting where the fires blazed, forcing the dark night away from hunched up figures, her keen eyes found several escape routes in the event of anything going amis. Not that it would. They never saw her coming.
Then her target appeared. This would be the third general she'd take out this night, and the last till the following night. Dawn was not far off. Placing her arrow calmly against the bow she stood at a side angle, her eyes following the line of sight provided by her stretched out arm. She drew the arrow back till the nail of her thumb rested in the cleft off her chin:-
She let out a gasp as a weight pressed down on her, lights had appeared everywhere and they were being followed by an enveloping darkness. It was an impossible sensation of being crushed and released in the same moment a sensation that vanished as suddenly as it appeared. Her world had changed around her.
Dulin was still in position to shoot as she saw the Dwarf in front of her hacking at some winged creature that was trying to pin him down in the surrounding chaos. Aiming for the drawfs throat she let loose the arrow but it vanished before it could reach its target, swallowed by white lights that were bouncing in the chaos, books were exploding around her, falling to the floor in heaps, A bunch of insects swarmed out of one and flew to an opening in the metal wall, water was pouring out of a book that bore the title 'The Greatest Falls of the universe'. Beside her another book had released a wolf that was now charging her with bared teeth. Reacting on instinct Dulin drew her dagger and as the wolf dived toward her she took a step backwards and thrust the dagger in the back of its neck as it charged past. As she pulled the dagger back she felt a hand on her arm. Swinging around to deal another blow she stopped. A Human was besides her, he was sporting a winning smile and had silent determination in his eyes. Drawing on her knowledge that humans were friends Dulin relaxed. In that moment the human attacked, taking his gun he slammed it into her chest, into the weakest point between the transition of her top armor and her overlarge leather belt, he then brought the weapon down again over the back of her head as she doubled forward. Stunned Dulin fell to one knee as more dived on her.
Angry now, Dulin held nothing back, she did not need to hold a weapon to be a effective fighter. Throwing the attackers of her back and taking hold of the arm of the human who had attacked her she spun him around and he went flying into a pile of books that then came thundering down. "Ay yai yai yai yar!" she cried her own battle cry as she joined in the fray that had spilled outside, hitting as many as she could heedless of who or what she was fighting, the madness of battle in her black eyes.
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Post by kei on Jul 11, 2013 10:05:16 GMT
I didn't mean to shoot at you James, the keyboard ran away with me. I assume Tegraine got taken to the other ship with the books during the fight. Maybe the pirates Magical guy performed a spell to transport him and the pile of books he was lying in to the ships hold? A bit of interesting background. Dulin is elvish for Nightingale, Ohta elvish for war, and Ava Sorya elvish for don't dread / don't worry. A calming resistance movement. think maybe I'll have her say that a fair few times whenever things get tense. Ava Sorya. (I was carving Elvish into my bow for an event I'm at in a few weeks)
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Post by fruitbat on Jul 11, 2013 10:45:31 GMT
A very stirring section, kei! I like your use of elvishisms (if there is such a noun!) It seems as if we have all now carved a path for our own characters to be able to go on their particular journey. In answer to your thoughts about where Tegraine might be, I was picking up on the metal surroundings mentioned by James. I wasn't entirely sure if this were a place on Khula itself or the pirate's ship. I guess it could be either. Both ways could work. What is important, I think, is that they now have the books in their possession and what Tegraine and his burgeoning crew of helpers will do about that. I hope your event with your bow goes well. Sounds intriguing!
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Post by kei on Jul 11, 2013 10:50:38 GMT
I think we'll make a good team, I loved the entry for your character by the way, sounds like she's been brought out of the book by him a few times. another fun fact, 'Goth' is elvish for enemy
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Post by fruitbat on Jul 11, 2013 10:53:18 GMT
How appropriate! I think she may make a few along the way!
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Post by james on Jul 12, 2013 19:10:41 GMT
Sorry been a bit slow off the mark.
Stacius sluggishly hefted his axe. His shoulders burned and his back ached, he knew that he did not have much energy left. A piercing battle cry from his left brought forth a sigh as he turned to face the threat.
“Cease! Á pusta!” shouted a voice. The shout echoed around the room in a way that no sound Stacius had ever heard before had. Stacius saw a three eyed human stood next to what Stacius first took to be a child. The three eyed man was looking around at the disarray that surrounded him. “Please, there is no need for violence.”
'There was from where I was standing' thought Stacius. He looked around making sure that he was safe from attack, before gratefully resting the shaft of his axe on the floor. He fought to hide the shaking from his exhausted body. He took the chance of this brief respite to ponder on his situation. Where was he? Where were his friends? How had he escaped the tunnels? His surroundings gave him no clue. Of the beings around him only a couple matched the descriptions and pictures that he had seen of humans as he was growing up. He did not recognise any of the others, and as far as he was aware there were only humans and dwarfs where he came from, that being said humans thought there were only humans; dwarfs hid below ground, beneath notice.
“I think you had better leave,” said the three eyed being to the group who had attacked Stacius. Those who were able to leave on their own carried those who weren't. Stacius watched them limp away, warily. After they had left Stacius saw a humanoid that he had not noticed before. It was stood absolutely still. Stacius doubted he would have seen it had it been in any kind of shadow. He noted the bow the being carried was hanging loose in its hands, but an arrow rested on the bow stave ready to be drawn at a moments notice. Stacius shifted slowly, bringing the creature into comfortable line of sight, whilst looking for something to hide behind.
“I think that an explanation is in order,” said the three eyed being.
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Post by kei on Jul 13, 2013 6:55:45 GMT
not slow of the mark compared to some games James. I think this is the fastest a group has ever gone. And your next piece is great. glad the disarray has been sorted, had wondered how we'd get rid of the pirates!
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Post by fruitbat on Jul 14, 2013 9:05:34 GMT
Hi, here is my latest offering. I have tried to keep away from furthering the role of either Dulin or Stacius, although I did give him a few words, James. I hope they meet with your idea of him. It was the only thing I could do to pick up from your end point now all characters have been brought together. I hope it is alright. FYI 'Corteza' = Spanish for tree bark. 'Sastre Barroco' = Baroque tailor (appropriate, I thought, a for place of Goths!) Even though the librarian was three times his height, the dwarf faced his questioner boldly. “I did what I had to merely for survival,” he replied. “But as you mentioned an explanation, I think I might not be the only one who needs to explain. Why am I here? Did you bring me from my world?” The librarian sighed. “Yes, Stacius, it was I. Your skills as a fierce warrior are the stuff of legends. Believe me, I have read every book there is on your people and several of those books are here, with me now. The books are the reason I have travelled to Khula and the reason you are all now here.” Tegraine looked to his two companions standing close by; a dark elf and a goth pixie from the planet Sastre Barroco, although Tegraine was now beginning to regret his latter choice. She had vexed him already with her demands for warmth and disagreeable demeanour. However, Tegraine was familiar with her unique powers. He had studied them in the Book of Goth over many years. He knew that given the right circumstances, Raisa could change her form to resemble any living creature she chose. Under his present conditions, on a planet with as yet, no sign of welcome, the recent attack from possible renegades from which he was still recovering and the lack of Ahura, Tegraine knew that Raisa’s powers would be invaluable. “My name is Tegraine,” he began, “I am the Sagamore Librarian from the planet Yarbril. We are on the planet Khula. I was travelling here to seek out the Shamanic texts made from the rare Corteza tree native to Khula. Sadly, the tree species has become increasingly rare, many having been cut down several centuries ago. The tree takes hundreds of years to reach full maturity and there are...” “Save the history lesson for your students,” interrupted Raisa. “I’m sure they’ll be fascinated. What is it you want with us?” “I apologise for the digression, Raisa. I tell you only so you may see how vital my mission is. I believe that my ship was brought down by the band of renegades that you, Stacius, were fighting. For your help, I am greatly indebted, although to attempt to kill them all was by no means necessary.” Stacius shifted about on his feet and began to mumble to himself in the language of his people. “I heard that, Stacius,” said Tegraine. “But you still haven’t told us why you need us,” reminded Raisa. “I am still shivering from the shock of being torn from Sastre. I was busy!” “And for that I can only apologise again, Raisa. I brought you here because I realised that with Ahura, my ship’s interface, now out of action, I have no one to assist me. The impact of the ship’s sudden landing, the contretemps with the renegades, the magic I had to use to bring you here has left me depleted. Stacius, Dulin, Raisa, you three have powers and abilities that I do not. There are no other beings that I could trust with the protection of these priceless books. In short, I need your help.” As Tegraine finished speaking, they heard the sound of footsteps approaching. All turned to face the new arrival.
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Post by james on Jul 14, 2013 9:32:42 GMT
Like it!
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Post by kei on Jul 15, 2013 7:59:55 GMT
That's great Fruitbat. Raisa has some fire. The approaching footsteps - did you have a plan or a thought on that or is it open for interpretation?
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Post by fruitbat on Jul 15, 2013 10:00:13 GMT
Hi, I think I was thinking of the Khula's ruling body who might finally come to see what all the commotion is about, but it's entirely open for suggestions!
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Post by kei on Jul 15, 2013 10:04:37 GMT
Good idea - i was thinking along similar lines when i read it
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Post by kei on Jul 16, 2013 11:04:46 GMT
Now i'm being the one slow of the mark. Sorry guys - you'll get the next piece before I go on this trip. We've had that many competition submissions this week I'm having trouble keeping up and I'm gonna be away from Thursday afternoon till mon. If i cannot find the time before then I will Make the time. I will write the next bit, i will i will i will! (If I tell myself enough times I may believe it.) You will have it on Thursday if not before.
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